Letter to Anthony Suter February 6 1986

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     55 bis, Blvd du Montparnasse
     5ème Etage
     75006 PARIS

     (telephone, to be installed on 
      21 February: 45 49 52 65) 

6 February 1986 


Dear Anthony, 

Now I can think of you as the first person (intending) 
to send to 55 bis a communication signalling the start of my bedding-  
down in to my new place. And thanks for putting that message
in the attractive form of the illustration of your poem
"These Are Lips" made by Jean Molinier.

 The poem, by the way, impressed me favorably when I 
first read it. Now that I have just finished reading it
again, I still think now that it is a very good poem, saying
something difficult and important with well chosen, imagina-
tive words. I wondered about only two things? "trapped
(I ask my typewriter now to start again) "trapped teeth,"
which might be hard to read to an audience or which might
draw a reader's attention to its difficulty. Also (and
I'm sure your experience will quickly provide the answer),
in such agreeable entrapments, does the tongue-tip trap
the teeth or do the teeth trap the tongue-tip? To move to
a less concrete problems--if it is a problem--in the follow-
ing stanza, second line, "from him" makes me study too long
to find what it modifies, it makes me wonder about the
smoothness of the thought continued from the first line.
However, neither of these matters would bother anyone hang-
ing onto the general sense of the developing action.
Also, the poem has many fine phrases and some that are
nearly perfect in the sense that probably no one could
bring up better ones without changing the meaning. For one
single example, I think that "sharpening taught" cannot be
improved. And after stanza 3, I see nothing that I would
change. Good work.

 About my new place, no bedding will be delivered there
before 26 February, maybe later, so you might think of bringing
a sleeping blanket (sleeping bag, i.e.). A friend of mine from
Germany said she hoped to visit me this month during the uni-
versity vacation period, but I don't know yet when she plans to
show up. I'll keep you posted on that. Since your visit will be 
short (I think you said), there'll be no problem: if she shows up
while you are at 55 bis or before you arrive, she can stay with
some friends of hers during your visit. So don't worry about that.
Wait a minute: I have a sleeping bag, so if there's no bedding,
you can sleep on a folding cot that I have, and I'll take the
sleeping bag. I brought linen and blankets from New York, so
there's no problem.

Best regards to all, 

P.S.  On 12 February, I'm to join a group of four people
 at The Village Voice (3 + me)
 putting on a "show" in honor of Langston Hughes, whose birthday
 fell in February (born 1 Feb. 1902). I plan to read a poem by
 Hughes that so angered white Southerners in the South in 1931
 that they planned to run him out of town. Then I'll read a few
 poems of my own
 that ere influenced
 by him. ---------------------------------------------------

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Typed letter to Anthony Suter from James Emanuel, dated February 6, 1986. He is impressed with Suter's poem "These Are Lips" and provides life-updates.

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  • container title
    James A. Emanuel Papers
  • creator
    James A. Emanuel
  • issue
    Box 3 Folder 26 Suter, Anthony, 1973-1994
  • rights
    James A. Emanuel Estate
  • rights holder
    James A. Emanuel Estate
  • version
    6-Feb-86